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2007-08-02 19:39:29
Last author: Evilmonk
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2007-06-15 [irulan]: *stalking* :D

2007-06-15 [Evilmonk]: The story begins in Japan. Tina is a ninja, I am a Samurai. The general jist is she is supposed to capture me, I am supposed to be returned to my lord, unharmed. She doesn't do as she is told, and neither do I, and as a result we are hunted by both clans, ninja and samurai. Finally we get cornered by both factions. Fierce battle yada yada yada, Tina dies, I finish off whose left, and I die as well. Flash forward to the future where we find each other again on ET, even more future where we get old and die again, only this time we float away, through the stars. The whole thing is supposed to have no dialog what-so-ever, and is only told through the omniscient as the narrator.

2007-06-15 [Evilmonk]: These are just some sketch ideas, and obviously not the final product. I know you both know this but I am saying it for my piece of mind, Tina need not know about this wiki yet. There...I feel better...LOL

2007-06-15 [irulan]: Very good premise and story. :) And my mouth is shut. :D

2007-06-15 [Evilmonk]: The whole idea is that REAL love transcends all things. While the kinda corny thing about ninja and samurai remains, its something were both into, and the story had to begin somewhere! That when two things or spirits were meant to be, death becomes just a pebble you step over. Its a little cloudy I realize but hopefully it'll get better.

2007-06-15 [irulan]: Awww, *melts*

2007-06-18 [TheRogue]: aw man!! that is FRIKIIN AWESOME! you are the man dude.. it flows wonderfully! i'm all in dude.. your first page is awesome and an automatic hook.. bravo!

2007-06-18 [Evilmonk]: I am humble. Thank you for the support!! Much to do, indeed...much to do!

2007-07-12 [Evilmonk]: I added a revision of the second page. Its early and the scan turned out poorly. I changed the garb, and dialog, and added some background although it does not show on what I have so far. Change for the better? Let me know if you could.

2007-07-12 [Yuriona]: *stalks*

2007-07-12 [Evilmonk]: OK. Uploaded a, still unfinished, yet heavy lined version of the new version. I like it better than the armor piece so I took that one down, but by all means throw me some feedback.

2007-08-02 [Evilmonk]: A couple more pages, unfinished. I write the story as I go so I either keep moving or I forget any good dialog I have stored on the ol "hard drive"...*taps on head*

2007-08-02 [Yuriona]: Coooool... I love the shading on the last page introducing the ninja. It gives it a slightly softer feel without loosing the hard edge of the story.

2007-08-02 [Evilmonk]: Thanks. I wanted to go with a softer feel because shes a woman of course. Women are softer, even NINJA! I wanted to show you can be a badass, without losing being feminine.

2007-08-02 [Yuriona]: You sure got it! XD The look over the teacup is definitely badass!

2007-08-02 [Evilmonk]: teehee...I thought so too! It has this "impressive...but you still ain't shit to me" feel to it.

2007-08-02 [Yuriona]: Definitely. :)

Dang... I wish I could figure out how to tell a story with pictures like that. I just find words much easier to work with.

2007-08-02 [Evilmonk]: Kiddo, I have never been MORE out of my element. Alls I CAN say is that I have gone through about 50 sheets of good paper just to get these 4 or 5 little pages.

2007-08-02 [Yuriona]: O_O Yikes. That's a lot of paper. Then again, my kids use about that much computer paper in a little over a week if I let 'em.

2007-08-02 [Evilmonk]: I used that over the span of two days! I sketch till I have what I need then I just flesh out the sketch, but I am not a good story-teller. I don't convey things well. So I have had a lot of fresh starts, here and again. LOL

2007-08-02 [Yuriona]: I don't seem to have trouble telling a story with words but I just find drawings too limiting for conveying what I want to story wise. :/

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