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Capture
By: Chance Hensley
December 21, 2008

I gave you
Everything
You played it
Just like a game
I tried to capture you
With my kindness and love

I tried
To forget you
I tried
With someone new
It left me
Broken and bruised

I loved you
With ev'rything
But to you
It's just a game
I tried to capture you
But I fell on my face
Now that your gone
Can't fill the empty space

I tried
WIth everything
I tried
To forget your name
I'm broken and bruised

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2008-12-23 [Artsy]: I like it, not your deepest work, but it feels very nice to me. Except for that last line. It seems out of place to me.

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